Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Murdersaur: Jurassic knife 2

New and improved.

I wanted to make some changes.

1 comment:

mortalterror said...

Actually, the car was more visually interesting. You had a lot more action, more diversity of shapes. This one is way overbalanced in the center of the page. That's where everything is happening in all three panels. This composition is static and less detailed.

If you want to build up the center panel and keep your dictator on the balcony, I suggest drawing in the crowd below him. Otherwise you have a lot of wasted space in that blank side of a building you got there now.