I wanted to make some changes.
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- Tristan Sandnes
- Seattle, WA, United States
- Atypical comicker. 20-something guy living Seattle, interested in making comics. I make lots of graphic design things; often for rollergirls.
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Actually, the car was more visually interesting. You had a lot more action, more diversity of shapes. This one is way overbalanced in the center of the page. That's where everything is happening in all three panels. This composition is static and less detailed.
If you want to build up the center panel and keep your dictator on the balcony, I suggest drawing in the crowd below him. Otherwise you have a lot of wasted space in that blank side of a building you got there now.
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